From what I can see... your units look characterful, with a well-co-ordinated color scheme. While some might question your use of halberds, I think they're just ducky looking on that unit. And it seems your use of bitz has overcome some of the "Pajama Soldier" look of the new State Troops.
Now, for the pictures... I'd advise putting your models in direct sunlight, and as Siberius noted, take the picture from further away and crop it in MSPaint or something.
Nice to see some of Mathi's Homeguard/Levy/Militia/Volunteers at last
- Z